reallyrivka (reallyrivka) wrote in anorgyofvowels,
reallyrivka
reallyrivka
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"metaphoric possibilities"

I love you with your eyes like stuttered melodies
with your nose like a dancer in flight
mouth like terminal tomorrows
tongue like regret

I love you with your eyes like cancers
with your eyelashes like flittering cures
wrists like semi-colons
legs like emdashs

I love you with your eyes like answers
with your eyebrows like unasked questions

I love you with your eyes like prayers
with your ears like repentence

I love you with your eyes like fire
with your hair like ash

I love you with your eyes like punctuation
with your body like poetry

I love you
with your eyes

**to be maybe handed in with my creative writing portfolio. give me feedback! i need all the help that i can get :)**
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